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"We were disappointed with the condition of the swimming pool. Based on the amenities listed on MakeMyTrip, we expected a clean and inviting pool for our family to enjoy. However, upon arrival, we found the pool to be dirty and unsuitable for swimming. We hope this issue can be addressed to improve future guest experiences."
"We were disappointed with the condition of the swimming pool. Based on the amenities listed on MakeMyTrip, we expected a clean and inviting pool for our family to enjoy. However, upon arrival, we found the pool to be dirty and unsuitable for swimming. We hope this issue can be addressed to improve future guest experiences."